Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts
Showing posts with label writing. Show all posts

Friday, 26 October 2018

Monday, 23 July 2018

Term 2 Writing Goal

My goal is for term 2 is to use different sentence starters to make my writing more interesting.

 I noticed that using different sentence starters is much better than using "In the holidays " or " I " because if you use different sentence starters it will more interesting.


Thursday, 10 May 2018

The Ascension

What's the difference between the Ascension and Resurrection?


Jesus was Resurrectioned after he died on the cross.
Forty day later Jesus was Ascension to Heven.
Resurrectioned is when Jesus came back to Human and Ascension is when Jesus came to God.


Tuesday, 8 May 2018

Writing Goal



My goal is for term 2 is to use different sentence starters to make my writing more interesting.


 I noticed that using different sentence starters is much better than using "In the holidays " or " I " because if you use different sentence starters it will more interesting.


My goal is to use some complex sentence to create pace, flow and interest

Reflection: I am sometimes using shorter or longer sentnece types but I need to deliberatley do this to help make my writing more interesting. 


Term 4: My New writing goal is to learn to spell words more and more diffcult words. E.g: Diffent - Different
How:
By reading more.
By choosing some words from the essential spelling list. 

Tuesday, 1 May 2018

Using Different types of words

The Elixir of Love


On  Monday  at school  I went to  the giant  hall with Abigail and my amazing class.
There was a amazing visitor that was controlling the show that was brilliant.
The visitor was a NZ OPERA. The characters were Kind and fascinating.   

Wednesday, 11 April 2018

Tuesday, 10 April 2018

Camp 2018

I think camp was super amazing because we had lots games that was fun and the Willow park staff had brilliant bedroom and playground and the dinner was fantastic.

I saw lots of childen have fun and not much childen getting upselt, mad and hurt because everyone had super, amazing, fantastic time at amazing camp.

I wonder if everyone had a great time and enjoy brilliant bedroom and playground also the food.





Bobcat sleeping

Red Panda running away







Giraffe saying hello
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